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As much as I applaud your enthusiasm towards 40K, and to a limited extent 'furries', you seem to have unfortunately butchered some of the fluff. When it comes to your ‘46th Desert Tigers Regiment’ I recommend that you don’t use the bits of the IG you like and just smash them together, I recommend that you find what’d be realistic and use that.

Yes, yes I know that might sound a little ridiculous using the word ‘realistic’ in with 40K, furries and homebrewed chicaner, but here’s the thing, realism is good. It allows you to be respected.

Final points are:
# Kasrkin with hormagaunt arm is a tad daft, considering he wouldn’t be able to move it much. Without a second arm (and therefore hand) he wouldn’t be able to operate anything bigger than a laspistol (or hellpistol if he’s lucky), and so he’d be moved away from active duty.
# Lt Vaun should have a uniform repair kit, so it’s unlikely he’d not be able to use the much finer twine to sow his eye shut; also likely he could get a replacement.
# I recommend that you don’t use phrases that refer to other canon groups, it just looks like you’ve become all hard over a certain group and said to yourself, “I wanna be just like them!”
# It’s unlikely that Kasrkin are going to be attached to an artillery regiment, it defeats the point of their CQB skills. I know Basilisks are nice, but they wouldn’t work.
# You can’t use artillery pieces for hit and run tactics (because you said you wanted to be like the Tallarn desert raiders).
# Kasrkin aren’t cavalry or high-mobile forces, so that also defeats the point of your hit and run specialisation. Speaking of which, the Kasrkin would overheat and perhaps die if you forced them to do things like that in a desert. Discounting the small chance of a cold desert.

I'll get back to you if I remember anything else.

Regards,

The Blackest Root.

PS - Officers don't wear medals or bright patches during operational duty, snipers and all that.

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